Feedback from Second Draft - Maryam, Kye , Jack, Klevis

In addition to our positive feedback, we were also given tips on what we could do to create more mystery to opening sequence.

These consisted of:

• The music should start a second before our film ident comes in at the beginning of the sequence.
• J cut could be used between the ident and the first clip that is played.
•  Having objects etc at the beginning and the characters revealed towards the end i.e. Traffic shot before Maryams shot.
• "A Trident Pictures Production" comes in later.

As a group we have taken on board al of these tips and have started making minor changes to our sequence.